[Readiscover07_rap] rap point 1 from 3/4 R Colyton

Mon Aug 13 20:19:39 EST 2007

Thank you

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Subject: [Readiscover07_rap] rap point 1 from 3/4 R Colyton

Rap point 1

It was difficult for us to imagine the story without pictures as we had read it first with the pictures.  A new teacher on our class thought the red creature  was a car instead of a child in the playground. 

Here is our story from the falcon's point of view.

When I went to search for food I saw a gigantic bird watching and waiting, looking like it was ready to attack. It hovered in the air and frightened me so I flew away as fast as I could. 

I then flew over a large pink cliff and saw creatures with lots of legs. I flew down to attack when I  saw one creature screeching, splashing and rocking on the wet surface. It then startled,  me so again I flew away as fast as I could.

I then flew over a bush with a very different bush scent. There was green everywhere and I could hear something squealing. I flew over to where the sound was coming from and I saw a blue creature squealing. I again flew as fast as I could.

Then I soared through a tunnel which went around and around in every direction, but I soon escaped from it. Then I tracked,  some feathers and in front of me was a summit of a mountain, but below the mountain there were creatures that were hissing and honking at each other, but I didn't lose sight of those feathers, so I chased it and hunted it down. When I got back to the nest, Frieda had a surprise.  She had eggs underneath her.

>From 3/4R Rappers

Colyton Public School. 

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