Hi Rappers,
We have been composing email responses to Rap point 1. Mr V. chose this one to share with you all:
I am soaring through the skies at my new home. I see mountains gleaming like sparkling waters. I am surrounded by hundreds of them. I saw across the waters and I see strange animals with many legs. ibi fly down for a closer look and things start to splash. I fly back up into the clouds. A gigantic bird hovers above me waiting to attack. I fly back to my new nest where my partner lays a surprise for me!
I am flying and trying to find a new home. I try to find some food but
I can't find any food to eat. I find a strange animal with many legs in the water. I swoop down and the legs are swinging at me so I fly away from it.
We will talk soon
4V and 4G Hassall Grove Rappers
Colleen Blancato
Teacher Librarian
Hassall Grove Public School
Buckwell Drive
HASSALL GROVE 2761
(02) 9835-1756
colleen.blancato at education.nsw.gov.au
<mailto:colleen.blancato at education.nsw.gov.au>
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