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Immigrant
chronicle by Peter Skrzynecki a rap
Teacher
support material: Overview of perspectives revealed and how they are presented:
Standard and Advanced
Focus Question
Peter Skrzynecki’s collection of poems, Immigrant
chronicle, offers a personal perspective on the experience
of Australian migrants.
What is his view and how is this revealed in the poems
set for study? Refer to at least THREE of the poems in your answer.
| Perspective / poems |
Language structures
and features |
- Dispossessed
of culture
- Exiled from
homeland
- Problems
with identity
- Anonymity
of migrants (they were statistics)
- Barriers
to assimilation
Poems
- Migrant hostel
- Crossing the Red Sea
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There is
a feeling of uncertainty about the future and this is reflected
in the
transitory stage of the composer’s early life. This is evident
in the long period of time spent at the migrant hostel and the
uncertainty about when the family would leave for their new home.
The responder also feels the uncertainty in the much longer poem
of Crossing the Red Sea, with the different stages of
the voyage marked out clearly.
The poet uses
sustained imagery of birds throughout the set poems. For example, “Like
a homing pigeon” is a forceful simile suggesting the natural
instinct of birds to gravitate towards what is familiar. In this
instance, it is the “accents” of people speaking the same language.
But at the same time the migrants are partitioned off at night
by “memories of hunger and hate”.
The anonymity of the
migrants is suggested in Migrant hostel in the following
lines: “No one kept count/ Of all the comings and goings”.
Barriers to
settling in to their new country and way of life are represented
in both
of these poems. One image that shows this is the pointing finger
that “Pointed in reprimand or shame;” where both nouns “reprimand” and “shame” have
negative and derogatory connotations. The responder feels the
sense of the small boy (the poet) being pointed at and being
humiliated for being a migrant
The other barrier
is the Equator, marking the boundary between the northern and
southern
hemispheres. This well-known imaginary line represents both a
physical change and an enormous cultural change. Its rich red
colour, “A blood-rimmed horizon signifies both the heat and intense
atmosphere, as well as the personal anguish and suffering of
the immigrants.
There is an entirely
different voice in the poem Crossing the Red Sea. The
imagery is of “shackles”, “sunken eyes”, ”secrets” and “exiles”,
showing people who are leaving their homeland in disgrace, as
if they are running away. It is very tortured, but more descriptive
and less personal in its tone than Migrant hostel. Images
from the lines “Patches and shreds/ Of dialogue” also give the
responder an idea of the worn out clothes of the immigrants. |
- Assimilation to a new culture
- Barriers
Poems
- Feliks Skrzynecki
- 10 Mary Street
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Feliks Skrzynecki is
a tribute to the composer’s father. It was written for him. Feliks
was an independent man who was a survivor: “but I’m alive”. He
did not try to do or buy whatever his neighbours did, as shown
in the lines: “Kept pace only with the Joneses/ Of his own mind’s
making”.
There is a
blend of child-like language in this poem, together with the
adult perspective.
The child’s view can be found in the lines ”Ten times around
the world” and “Why his arms didn’t fall off”. At the end of
the poem is the statement/ concept that shows both the perspective
of the father, and of the adult son: “like a dumb prophet,/ Watched
me pegging my tents/ Further and further south of Hadrian’s Wall”.
The father knew that his son was growing up differently, moving
away from the father’s culture, but he also was wise enough to
know that he couldn’t do anything about it. He could not prevent
his son from becoming assimilated.
In 10 Mary Street the
humdrum of day-to-day existence is expressed in the repetition
of time “for nineteen years”. This is the rhythm and routine
of new life “with paint guaranteed” and it suggests the introduction
of a new culture, a more materialistic culture than the old world
they had known in Europe.
The house key
lies under a rusty bucket but the image of the key is most significant
in
the last three lines: “Inheritors of a key/ That’ll open no house/
When this one is pulled down”. The key to the nineteen years
is a happy harmonious home, where the persona learned to leave
behind his new identity and accept the old one. This is a very
nostalgic poem about the way it was in Australia in the 1950s.
Once again there was the barrier, the “still too-narrow bridge” that
separated the Australian world from that of Poland. The use of
the colloquial phrase “like bursting at the seams” reinforces
the sense of change and assimilation. |
- Search for an identity:
Who am I?
Poems
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In the first section
of Post card Skrzynecki conveys impersonal tone by using
the third person. This is contrasted with the second section
of the poem where he addresses the town as an old friend. It
suggests an intimacy with Warsaw that the poet doesn’t have.
At the same
time, there is a personal approach in the first section. The
post card “haunts” him
and he needs to show it to his parents. The persona’s dilemma
comes with the rhetorical question: “What’s my choice to be?” And
this is followed with the lines: “What more/ Do you want/ Besides/
The gift of despair?” The despair is brought about because of
the persona’s dilemma about where he belongs. The haunting is
continued with the image of ”...You survived/ In the minds/ Of
a dying generation/ Half a world away.” Look at the possible
meanings of dying- culture, physical?
In 10 Mary Street,
Peter ravages the backyard garden while his parents tend it.
They care for it “Like adopted children”, a very forceful simile.
He was “like a hungry bird”. In the lines “For nineteen years
/ We lived together-
Kept pre-war
Europe alive”, the persona does not seem to have been part of
this. It appears to be expressed by an outsider. |
Love/understanding/appreciation
of parents and the trials they have experienced
Poems
- 10 Mary Street
- Feliks Skrzynecki
- Kornelia Woloszczuk
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In 10 Mary Street he
feels love and understanding from both parents. He is comfortable
in his home, enough to ravage the garden anyway.
The personal
pronoun “my” in Feliks
S denotes a special relationship between the speaker and
his subject. The adjective “gentle” helps to define the way
the poet feels about his father. This adjective also sets the
tone of the poem and reveals the poet’s perspective of his
father as one of love and admiration.
In Kornelia a
more frightening perspective is seen, perhaps because the poet
believes that he has disappointed his mother. In the lines, “Having
only one child/ Is like having/ One eye in your head” she is
saying that it is better to have one child than no child at all.
There is no doubt that the persona reveres his mother. “Walking/
Behind her” and “Nervous, uncertain/ Of distances and colours/
We pass through”, shows that he looks to her for approval, and
is concerned he has failed her in whatever he has done. The lines. “Her
feet/ Make no imprint/ Upon the grass/ She treads” tell the responder
that the persona looks to the woman in awe as if she is something
sacred. |
- Guilt; frustration
- Fear of isolation
Poems
- Kornelia
Woloszczuk
- Chronic ward
- Post card
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In Kornelia the
use of rhetorical questions reveals the poet’s perspective of
himself: his role as the son is frustrated-“Where did I go wrong”?
The disturbed natural imagery “darkness of storms” conveys Skrzynecki’s
view of his mother, in which war, alienation, immigration have
all affected her, but they have had an impact on him too. This
poem shows his distance from his mother. He desperately wants
her approval but it comes forth only grudgingly in the final
lines, when she says having one child is better than having none.
While Chronic ward seems
to be different from the other poems in not being about migration,
it is however similar in that it is associated with people alienated
from society, the mentally ill. Whilst these people are locked
away from “normal” society, this is also the way immigrants see
themselves.
Post card presents
a view of a man haunted by his cultural heritage. It disturbs
him, yet invites him, in the final image of “We will meet/ Before
you die.” |
Credits
Thank you to Maya
Puiu, ESL teacher at Willoughby Girls High School, Pat Adams, Head
Teacher English at Girraween High School, and Lesley Fitzpatrick, Senior
Project Officer, Multicultural Programs Unit, for developing the support
material.
This rap is a joint
project of the Library and Information Literacy and English units,
Professional Support and Curriculum Directorate, and the Multicultural
Programs Unit, NSW Department of Education and Training.

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