I really liked ur fairytale and I think it was really creative.
It is really funny when the bears ruined Goldilock's house!!!
It was so much fun reading and u did a really good job.
From Nicholas
At endeavour sports high school 7e1
From: Rap PHS <rap_phs@yahoo.com.au>
To: fairytales05 <fairytales05_rap@ituws1.itbcorpweb.det.nsw.edu.au>
Subject: fairytales05_rap Risheeks fractured fairytale.
Date: Fri, 26 Aug 2005 10:08:50 +1000 (EST)
Goldilocks, the three bears and the other characters.
Once upon a time there was a little girl who lived in a house that was in a forest. She lived alone in the big house because she had lost her family and sometimes went for walks in the forest
One day when she was going for a walk so that the porridge she had made would cool down, she left her lock open thinking that she had closed it. While she was walking she met red riding hood and they both walked together to red riding hoods grandmothers’ house. On the way they saw the big bad wolf chasing the pigs and trying to eat them. They both helped the pigs scare the wolf away and continued on their journey. When they got to red riding hood’s grand mother’s house they saw another wolf and this time they again scared him away. When they were going back they stopped somewhere to play games.
While she had gone and was having fun three bears came wandering and reached her house. They tried the door and found that it was open. The three bears went in and found that the house was empty. They were looking around the house and found a bucket full of hot porridge. The smallest bear (the baby bear) had a spoonful of porridge and liked it. Then he told daddy bear and mummy bear how good the porridge was. Then daddy bear and mummy bear had also tasted the porridge and liked it they took turns sitting on the rocking chair but broke it after all of them sat on it together. They played games on the playstation and computer. After a while all the three bears were tired and wanted to sleep for a while. They went up to sleep. But there was a problem there was only one bed and three bears, so all three of them slept together in one bed till the bed broke and they fell
down. But they bears kept sleeping.
Goldilocks came home after 2- 3hours and was shocked to see the door open but thought that someone may have opened it and ran away but as soon as she got in she saw everything messed up. She went to her table and found that the porridge had been eaten and her only chair had been broken. Then she went upstairs to see what damage had happened there. She was shocked to see three bears sleeping on top of her bed which had been broken by the weight of the three bears.
Goldilocks started shouting and screaming about the damage when the bears woke and ran as fast as they could from the house.
After some days the bears came back to apologise for the damage they had done and told goldilocks that they would help her fix everything up. Then goldilocks felt sorry for them because the bears had no house so she told the bears that they could come and live with her. Then the bears and goldilocks made a new house and new furniture with wood they got from the forest. Goldilocks and mummy bear made the food everyday and after lunch everyone went for a long walk in the forest together and they made sure that the door was locked.
Made by Risheek kaul
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