We thought your story was really creative. We enjoyed it immensesly especially when she asked if anybody loved her and he said 'no'. We thought that was great because it was hilarious and creative. I liked the reality of the window cleaner's chains breaking. Overall it was a good story and our clas all enjoyed it.
Yours sincerely Gabe and Duncan.
From: "Jennifer Dengate" <year7jackson@hotmail.com> To: fairytales05_rap@ituws1.itbcorpweb.det.nsw.edu.au Subject: fairytales05_rap rap point 3 Date: Fri, 19 Aug 2005 14:51:40 +1000 >Once upon a time there lived a fairy godmother. Forget about her she >died- she was hit by a plane -now on with the story. > >In Sydeny, Australia, there is a big building and in the penthouse >apartment is a young adolescent girl with long, long, long braided >hair, she has been trapped in there by her snivilescent stepmother >for nearly all her life, although she is let out once a week to go >to the hairdresser. But every night her hair just grows longer. > >Her name is Niamh, and boy she likes the look of that new window
>cleaner! She likes the way he washes that window,YUM! and the way he >scratches the window,SCREECH! On second thought no, she dosen't like >that sound. > >Then suddenly "SNAP" the window washer's chain brakes. Niahm quickly >goes to the window and opens it and yells, "Grab onto my hair". He >does so and yells "OUCH",. > >When they are both up in the penthouse Niamh is about to confess her >love , but he suddenly says "Thanks again, I'm just going to go back >to my boyfriend's house." > >She yells"Does anyone love me?" >The window washer yells back"NO!" > >And they didn't live happily ever after. > >_________________________________________________________________ >SEEK: Over 80,000 jobs across all industries at Australia's #1 job >site.
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