Dear All,
As usual, the Moorefield girls have come up with a thorough and
well-thought-out response. Your understanding of the use of voices, of Toan
as the 'outside observer', the use of italics etc was right on the ball.
Great work.
One of the great things about having your work studied is to see that some
of the things you agonised over actually are noticed.
Keep it up.
Brian
